Chapter 6: The Basic Elements of a Sentence
Rebekah Bennetch; Corey Owen; and Zachary Keesey
Learning Objectives
By the end of this chapter, you should be able to:
- Recognize the difference between a clause and phrase
- Distinguish between an independent clause and a dependent clause
- Identify and explain the four different sentence structures (simple, compound, complex, compound-complex)
Key Terms and Concepts
- phrase
- clause
- independent clause
- dependent clause
- coordinating conjunction
- subordinate conjunction
Unsurprisingly, you are required to submit written assignments for this paper and other papers at university. Your own level of comfort in this area will be different from that of other students, but like all skills, writing is improved through practice. All of us have strengths when it comes to writing, and all of us have areas we can improve.
We’re going to start with the basic elements of sentences right now, focusing on sentence level issues that can harm your writing. This way, we have a common language as we discuss this topic. This chapter works best with the videos available to you on xOtago.
Let’s start by going over basic grammatical terms that you will need to know for this section.
Exercise #1: Grammar Vocabulary Self-Assessment
Below you will see some flash cards with grammatical terms. These are all terms that we will mention throughout this technical writing section. Try to predict what you think these words mean. If you can’t define the word, can you come up with an example? If the definitions don’t make sense yet, that’s okay: we’ll revisit these terms later. This assessment is just for your to test your own knowledge.
Clauses and Phrases
When we build anything, be it a car, a house, or even a sentence, it is important to be familiar with the tools we are using. Grammatical elements are the main “tools” we use when when building sentences and longer written works such as reports. Thus, some understanding of grammatical terminology will help us to construct effective sentences. If you would like to review some basic parts of speech (nouns, pronouns, articles, adjectives, adverbs, prepositions, etc), see the Parts of Speech Overview at the Purdue OWL website. When I was young, I learned about the parts of speech from the television infomercials School House Rocks. (I’ve included these videos here out of nostalgia, but the are definitely optional viewing for you.):
The two essential parts of a sentence are the subject and the verb. While we may be familiar with the word “subject” being synonymous with “topic”, the subject of a sentence is a grammatical constituent of a sentence that often (but not always) is the topic. The subject is usually and noun or noun phrase, and the rest of the sentence tells us what that noun does or how it exists. In this way, the subject relates to the verb. The verb (or verb phrase) is a word or group of words that convey the action (such as run, eat, grow, learn, etc.) or state of being (such as be or seem). The subject expresses who or what does the action or is in a state of being. When you combine these two elements, you get a clause. All independent clauses must contain both a subject and a verb.
Here are two simple examples of a clause.
(2) Tama is running.
There are also phrases, which lack either a subject or a verb, or both, so they need to relate to or modify other parts of the sentence. Don’t worry too much about phrases, though. We are going to focus on clauses here.
Independent clauses, also called main clauses, can stand on their own and convey an idea. Let’s look at some examples.
Here is a sentence:
Can you identify the subject, verb, clause, and phrase in that sentence? If not, that’s okay.
Here’s a break down of the difference parts of the sentence.
Notice the independent clause (“The engineers stood around the table”) is a complete idea. If we removed the phrase “looking at the schematics for the machine”, the independent clause would still work as a complete sentence. The phrase (“looking at schematics for the machine”) would not be a complete sentence by itself. Its verb (“looking”) is not complete (“looking” rather than “look” or “are looking”), and it does not have a subject for that verb, which is why it isn’t a clause. It could not be a complete sentence on its own.
Dependent clauses rely on another part of the sentence for meaning and can’t stand on their own.
Here’s an example:
Can you identify the different parts we have discussed so far? Below is a break down of the sentence.
Sentence 2 has one dependent clause and one independent clause, each with its own subject-verb combination (“they discussed” and “they decided”). The two clauses are joined by the subordinate conjunction, “after,” which makes the first clause (“After they discussed different options”) subordinate to or dependent upon the second one (“they decided to re-design the components).
Note also that the subordinate clause can come before (“After they discussed different options, they decided to re-design the components”) or after (“They decided to re-design the components after they discussed different options“) the independent clause. Position does not determine subordination; the grammar of the clause determines subordination. Subordinate clauses will begin with a subordinate conjunction (e.g., when, if, because, etc.), lack a complete verb or verb group (looking instead of look, will look, have looked, is looking, etc.), or lack a subject (if the sentence is not a command: “Sit down”, for example, is a complete sentence, even though its subject (“you”) is implied only).
Being able to identify the critical parts of the sentence will help you design sentences that have a clear and effective subject-verb relationship.
If you need some more guidance on sentences, please watch the sentence construction videos on xOtago, or you can watch this video from Purdue OWL, which will segue for you into the next section of this chapter.
Exercise #2: Identify the Clause
In this activity, you will identify all the words in either the independent clause or dependent clause in a sentence. You must click on all the words that are part of that clause to get the points.
For example, if you are supposed to identify an independent clause, and your sentence is
I will go to work after I eat breakfast.
you would click on “I” “will” “go” “to” and “work”
If you are supposed to identify a dependent clause for the same sentence, you would click on “after” “I” “eat” and “breakfast”.
Sentence Structures
There are four common ways to combine independent and dependent clauses, creating the following four sentences structures: simple, compound, complex, and compound-complex. In the examples above, Sentence 1 is a simple sentence, while Sentence 2 is complex.
We will go over each sentence structure now.
SIMPLE SENTENCES have one main clause and any number of phrases. Below is the formula for a simple sentence.
The following are all examples of simple sentences:
- A simple sentence can be very effective.
- It makes one direct point.
- It is good for creating emphasis and clarity.
- Too many in a row can sound repetitive and choppy.
- Varied sentence structure sounds more natural.
Can you identify the subject, verb, and phrases (if any) in the above sentences?
COMPOUND SENTENCES have two or more independent clauses joined by coordinating conjunctions (CC) such as and, but, for, yet, nor, or, so. A common acronym for remembering all of the conjunctions is FANBOYS. You can also connect them using punctuation such as a semi-colon or a colon. By coordinating the ideas, you are giving them roughly equal weight and importance.
Please note that these coordinating conjunctions are different from subordinate conjunctions, which show a generally unequal relationship between the clauses.
Below is the formula for a compound sentence:
- A compound sentence coordinates two ideas, and each idea is given roughly equal weight.
- The two ideas are closely related, so you don’t want to separate them with a period.
- The two clauses make up part of the same idea, so they should be part of the same sentence.
- The two clauses may express a parallel idea, and they might also have a parallel structure.
- You must remember to include the coordinating conjunction, or you may commit a comma splice.
In formal writing, avoid beginning a sentence with a coordinating conjunction.
COMPLEX SENTENCES express complex and usually unequal relationships between ideas. One idea is “subordinated” to the main idea by using a subordinate conjunction (like “while” or “although”). One idea is “dependent” upon the other one for logic and completeness. Complex sentences include one main clause and at least one dependent clause (see Example 2 above). Often, it is stylistically effective to begin your sentence with the dependent clause, and place the main clause at the end for emphasis.
The following are all examples of complex sentences. Subordinate conjunctions are in bold.
- When you make a complex sentence, you subordinate one idea to another.
- If you place the subordinate clause first, you give added emphasis to the main clause at the end.
- Despite the fact that many students try to use them that way.
- x NOTE: this last bullet is a sentence fragment, and not a subordinate clause. Subordinate clauses cannot stand on their own.
Check out this link for a list of subordinate conjunctions if you would like to see more examples.
COMPOUND-COMPLEX SENTENCES have at least two independent clauses and at least one dependent clause. Because a compound-complex sentence is usually quite long, you must be careful that it makes sense; it is easy for the reader to get lost in a long sentence.
Given the complex nature of the structure, let’s look at a few examples and break them down into their parts:
Independent Clause #1: Alphonse doesn’t like action movies.
Dependent Clause: because they are so loud
Independent Clause #2: he doesn’t watch them.
Dependent Clause: Although it will be close
Independent Clause #1: I think we will meet the deadline
Independent Clause #2: we will complete the project.
While our supervisor can be a bit of a pain at times, he genuinely cares about the work, and he wants to see us succeed.
Dependent Clause: While our supervisor can be a bit of a pain at times
Independent Clause #1: he genuinely cares about the work
Independent Clause #2: he wants to see us succeed
EXERCISE #3 Identifying Sentence Types
Read the sentences below and identify which sentence structure is being used.
EXERCISE #4: Combining sentences
Below are two sentences separated by a line ( | ). Combine the pair of sentences to make one idea subordinate to the other. You can do this by either writing them down, or thinking it in your brain. When you have an answer, click on the sentences to see possible answers.
Notice the impression you convey by how you subordinate one idea to another. If your combined sentence was a topic sentence for a paragraph, what idea would the reader expect that paragraph to emphasize?
Key Takeaways
- A sentence must have a subject and verb to form a complete idea.
- A clause has both a subject and verb. There are two types of clauses: an independent clause (which can stand alone) and a dependent clause (which can not stand alone).
- Using a variety of sentence types as well as using these types strategically to convey your ideas will strengthen your style. Keep the following in mind:
- Simple sentences are great for emphasis. They make great topic sentences.
- Compound sentences balance ideas; they are great for conveying the equal importance of related ideas.
- Complex sentences–when you use them effectively–show complicated relationships between ideas by subordinating one idea to another.
- Compound-complex sentences can add complexity to your writing, but you need be make sure it the writing doesn’t lose the reader.
- Ultimately, using a combination of these structures will make your writing stronger.
References
Material in this chapter is adapted from “Technical Writing Essentials” by Suzan Last (on BCcampus). It is licensed under Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 International License.
a word that conveys the action or state of being in a sentence
when a subject and verb are combined in a sentence. There are two types: independent clause and dependent clause.
a group of words that are missing a subject, a verb, or both
the topic being discussed in a clause or sentence
a word that connects a dependent clause to an independent clause. It shows a cause-and-effect relationship or a shift in time and place between the two clauses
a clause that can stand on it's own because it conveys a complete idea.
a word that joins two clauses. These include words like and, but, for, yet, nor, or, so